Lonesomely Alone
I stayed up late to see you in the sky once more
Never knew the fire of your cold heart would burn me to my core
I waited for the light by standing in the shadowsΒ
Never thought I'll end up being here for this long
I waited but you never came
I cried but you never saw
I prayed to darkness to see the light
I begged for the moonlight but dark clouds took it away
Now I'm standing here all aloneΒ
Like I've never been beforeΒ
Slowly dissolving in my tears
Such a tragedy when one is so lonesomely aloneΒ
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PayamSafiriΒ
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Hello Payam...
This is so beautiful and so sad...
I'm sure many people know the place you stand...
You're less alone than you think...
They just haven't said anything yet...
I'm sure you have lots of friends...
You probably find more in Cyberspace...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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Hello...Β
Some people come into our lives to make their point and leave us with valuable lessons... each person learns about life in different ways and it might sound sad but it is actually very interesting...
I always felt like I'm a weirdo in one way or another... and I always learn from people who just leave me because they think I don't provide my side of what they wanted in a friendship or expected to receive something from me in their minds without even telling me about what it is that they want... It feels sad but I think instead of having thousands of people around me, I'd be perfectly ok with only five or even one... I try my best but seems like it's never enough...
all that and much much more is called LIFE...Β
thanks again ππβ€β€π»π»π€©π€©ππ
Sparrowsong has spoken wisely. I agree with everything she has said.
Loneliness is a horrible, horrible feeling.Β
Never forget that strangers are often friends you that you have not yet met x
You guys are absolutely right... π―Β Β
I canβt talk about everyone but in my case, sometimes all I want is a small gesture of attention or a honest opinion, maybe a word from a kind heart or a caring soul...Β
most people underestimate the power in small things, like a smile or saying hi...
kindness can turn lifeless deserts to heavenly forests...Β
Strangers can hurt but also they can be a surprise we always wanted... you never know...
even our loved ones, they were also strangers before they find their ways to our hearts... πβ€πΉ
thank you again for your kind words... it means a lot to me... πππ€©π€©ππβ€β€πΉπΉπ§π§π¨π¨π¦π¦πππ»π»πΊπΊπΉπΉ
Uou are so welcome x
You know, reading your poetry and also your comments Payam you seem like quite a beautiful soulful person to me...I hope in time you'll meet people deserving of your love and friendship x
Hi...Β
I'm speechless... I don't know how to thank you... I simply cannot put my love and gratitude in words... I'm eternally grateful...
thank you so much π π β€ π π β₯Β
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Love...you are so welcome...when we see ourselves only through the eyes of others... the reflection can get warped...only our own eyes see the truth of ourselves x