Poem -
Looking Glass
*Jill's Tweedledee Tweedledum Challenge*
So idyllic, so virginal clean,
Glide Tweedledee pristine.
Survive queen of heart's palace
Obliviously exist life of Alice.
Proper adjectives obstruct throat,
Navigate life, a sacrificial goat.
Forbid misery to rain on tea party
White rabbit scolds when tad tardy
Craving acceptance as we all do,
Mask what eats through.
Pointed finger at cast reflection,
Self-impose biased rejection.
Aspersions won't hide naked truth,
NaΓ―vetΓ© lost amidst early youth.
Tweedledum confident pride,
It wonβt disguise ugliness inside.
Paint Cheshire smile on vague face,
Mania looks refined smirk in place.
Perilously plot life's foggy mirror,
No guarantees, it gets damned clearer
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???β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Awesome write Lisa and pinned of course ?
thank you Jill. Now to work on Simon's challenge. I am soooo stoked these challenges are bringing more comments to my work. I have longed for such regard lol
Awwww Lisa your work is always so beautiful too β€οΈ?β€οΈ
You're so sweet. thank you.Β ?
But itβs true β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Β βΊοΈ As are you Jill ?Β
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Absolutely brilliant! Love these challenges too, testing our ink lol
thank you Simon....now to tackle your challenge
Pinned...perfect...?
Thank you kindly MarionΒ
My Dear Lisa,
You take me to places that few poets can.
Through "The Looking Glass" I peered
Read your poem most revered
'bout Tweedledee and Tweedledum
The epitome of a writer's sum
All my love,
Larry xxx
thank you Larry.Your support means so much. I also truly appreciate the pin as well