Lost In Poetries Labyrinth

I was once lost in a poem,Β
So disorientated beyond belief.
A poem describing a labyrinth,Β
Trapped within its high massif.
Just a figurine in a maze,Β
A plaything of poetry gods.
My chance of ever escaping,Β
Was simply against the odds.
I must have walked eternities,Β
Forever turning left and right.
But never a thirst or hunger,Β
During every dark day and night.
Something was keeping me alive,Β
At that time I never knew.
I was enduring the unendurable,Β
Struggling to make a breakthrough.
I smelt it before I felt it,Β
A fragrant breeze just up ahead.
Around the corner cruelty displayed,Β
Footprints where I once tread.
I collapsed resigned to my fate,Β
Passed out my mind now astray.
I awoke with light all around me,Β
Shining through an open doorway.
My welcome passage back revealed,Β
To escape this web of complexity.
Perhaps a learning lesson of life,Β
Each captive soul is soon set free.

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Comments
great concept and write Shaun!..................................Jim
Jim many thanks for your kind and generous comment sir.
Been away but just returned tonight and will return again tomorrow to start reading yours and other members too.
It's a good vibe that a poet of your class and quality enjoyed it.Β
Mr Sandman calleth me but back tomorrow with more to share and read other members also.
Thanks again Jim and enjoy all the good that poetry and life can bestow.Β
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Always stay left!!!! Unless your in America ;)
Well done, great write
Awww Wowsas I love thisun Shaun, We are always lost in your labyrinths lol ouchy pins gor you me dear βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈπππ
Great write Shaun, loved the line...
' I smelt it before I felt it' π cheeky and brilliant.
The last verse was perfect, I really enjoyed this read.
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wow I can't believe I missed this beauty. as always Shaun well done