LOST IN THE FOREST
Standing in theĀ coldĀ on the edge
of the forest watching the parade
When old man told me of his life
Told me his wife was gone just
Then I saw Tony run in to the
forest I say hay he didn't hear me
Just then a troll came out forest
and drag me in the forest I saw
Tony go right I went left then
I heard girl say over here Tony
The deeper I went in to the forest
I could hear a vioin playing and
Then the troll stop and said your
on your own then I know I was lost
in the forest I walked though the
forest intill I came to clearing
I saw water fall and stream
andĀ a naked violinist playing
Ave maria when he saw me he ran
in to the forest and I could hear
a guitar and a girl laughing back
in the forsest the deeper I went the
darker it got and got closer to the
sound of the guitar and the laughing
I came to clearing and out the forest
I saw who was playing the guitar it was
Tony, and Cherie was Ā laughing and I am
No longer lost in the forest.
Ā
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LOL!! Wow!! LOL!!......this was so much fun to read GREG!!......VERY creative poetic narrative.... with scenes that I will never forget my friend..... I'm pretty sure I know where much of the inspiration came from but this is just SO CHARMING my dear poet brother!!.....I Love it!!..... thank you so much for including Cherie and I.... this was just a blast man!!.... I'm still smiling over here...... and like Cherie said...... I'd never leave you lost brother!!......ALL STARS & PINNED because it is so personal and funny for me!!...... Lots of love to you and yours my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo. :)
Thank you Tony I had fun writeing it
Hi Greg..
i was sucked in from the beginning.. lol
happy that I continued to the end of this one..
very good story telling my friend..
be blessed..
Ā
thank you Wilford
Hey Greg,Ā
Cool poem! I'm sorry I haven't checked out your writing previously(so thanks for commenting on mine), but I have limited time(and ability), so I only have a couple of real good friends on here so far.Ā
I really liked your wacky dream,(and please don't anyone take offense to this...especially you, Tony)Ā but the part of the naked guitar player, I would have vastly pref...nope, not going to say it!. Well written! Enjoyed it.Ā Ā
M.Ā
thank you Lonely your great writer to and this wasn't dream
its part of old poem called standing in the cold
and the naked violinist is real he lives in Sweden
I saved the photo from there website Ā hopeing to write poem about him
but couldn't get the photo to work so I gave up Ā the reats of the
story with tony and Cherie was made up thank you for reading
Oh, okay, thanks for letting me know, Greg. Really great write either way.Ā
Glad I peaked at your portfolio.Ā
Have a great day.Ā
M.Ā