Poem - 05 April 2015, 15:30

Lost In A Maze

The silver moon, glowed throughout the night
The coyote's howled, with freight
Owl's echoed, throughout the hollowed wood's
Chipmunks gathered they're goods
The beast was soon, to arrive
The forest, fought to survive
Lost in a maze
Created by the misty haze
The beast, had sent out to hunt
His feet, rustled through the leaves, he would grunt
He would whistle, calling a deer
But even the deer, knew evil was near
The grizzlies began to growl
Wolve's began to howl
The beast let out a shreik
As he gazed upon the reflection of the creek
For he had faced defeat
Searching for something to eat
The animal's gathered around
Each call, was echoing in sound
After all the shot's, that had been fired
The hunter's, were far from admired
The animals too, have a heart
They must stop the forest's from falling apart
The hunting beast, had become hunted that same night
That the full moon, had shone bright
What you reap, is what you sow
That, the hunter did not even know

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Tony Taylor05 April 2015, 15:38

Hi Melissa!!........I really enjoyed this narrative piece...........I wanted it to go on.........felt like I was only getting the beginning of the story..........excellent timing and formatting here.........helped to deliver this most compelling write dear poetess..........well done............hugs-n-smiles..........T xx

Melissa Caron05 April 2015, 16:36

Thanks Tony man!! I will most likely be writing a part two to this as well... because you are so right, the story is only beginning, there are so many ways that us humans hurt animal's without even thinking every day... Truly appreciated, hugs n smiles

Sincerely,

XxX Melissa <3

Jai Masters05 April 2015, 15:47

Melissa,

So much imagery to enjoy,

you have a rich imagination for the reader to

Learn from and enjoy your story,

I loved this line "the animals too have a heart"

Well done! Jai :) & the accompanying image is amazing!

Melissa Caron05 April 2015, 16:38

Thanks Jai!! I am glad you enjoyed my write

Sincerely,

XxX Melissa <3

AUTHOR WILLIAMS...05 April 2015, 17:03

Hi Melissa,

A poem with a good theme and well written by its rhymes, my applause, my vote

Lost in a maze
Created by the misty haze
The beast, had sent out to hunt
His feet, rustled through the leaves, he would grunt
He would whistle, calling a deer
But even the deer, knew evil was near

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Christopher Correia05 April 2015, 18:22

Melissa that was a darn exciting write, great story you created here with superb rhyming as well, you got it all going in this poem....Melissa is on fire, superb, man....faved as well

Melissa Caron05 April 2015, 22:34

Chris, I thought you would like that one. :) Thanks, I love your comments. Always so peppy. Great appreciation my friend

Sincerely

XxX Melissa <3

Melissa Caron05 April 2015, 22:30

Thanks Williams :) I appreciate it

Sincerely

XxX Melissa <3