Love Is A Puzzle For Two To Solve

Wow Bro. Curtis

Aren't you the romantic, my friend and brother, i like the way you constructed this one and told the story and gave  birth, to the truest meaning of loneliness by any, with the absence of love in our lives and to compare it with the puzzle piece, was very cleaver my friend...Really gravitated to these lines.......

Endowed we are with lips to pour out words  

Of perfumed adoration; never to deride;  

                          ...

For when all seems lost in the cruel night wind

Comfort is the sound of another heart beating

For heartbeats fall silent and wax cold

Without the union of another soul to nurture;  

                           ...

Absent is the oil for the rhythm;  

 Copious pouring of affection soothes the skin  

 As it was said to Adam in his perfect beginning

‘It is not good for man to be alone’

                         ...

 Even with the passing of the ancient world

 We are in peril if that time honored mould,

Is tinkered with or broken.

Rock on Brother Curtis,

Jim

Heya my soul brother over the sea, the weight of absent love twists within all who love without that soothing heartbeat to numb the pain, loving someone empties out the beauty within ones soul willing and freely, having no one to reflect the love is indeed a boat floating within reprieve, I've enjoyed seeing into the male perspective of missing love pieces of puzzle, the more love you have in your heart to share, with no one to share it with often becomes the agony within ones soul, upon finding the love of your life, reflection of equality or over flow can either suffocate or eliminate oneself, the puzzle of love is yet to be resolved, we love of different values, the words love are highly misunderstood, we all love either within intense enlightenment or only fragments due to fear, how that fragile fear is created in the very name of love, is the answer to the puzzle, we love in protective measures insecurities seem to elope the heights of love now days afraid of hurt, to love is painful, to loose love is more painful placing reservations within ones heart, if hurt vanished from this earth people would love openly, more people would have and be in love, maybe the world would be a better place, a world to love a be proud of. Anyway sweetheart listen to me dribbling about the woes of love, love , love, love, is all you need lol, loads of love your soul sister down under, nardine xoxo

Wow C........you never cease to amaze me my brother.......I think you could write on any subject you so desired.........last night I watched a documentary on Mark Twain.........you remind me of him, in that, he was an every man's writer........able to reach everyone from every background........you do that with your poetry.........I am always anxious to see what you will do next..........I am proud to call you a bad Mamma Jamma........love you bro.......tony  xx

Wow Curtis this one of your best I can say.Exquisite write dear.

Hi Curtis 'mamma j…,

Your story is now being featured and promoted on our FB page. 

Congrats from the CosmoFunnel team. 

Glide on love.

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My applause and Congrats Curtis 'mamma j..., a well deserved recognition,

Regards & Love

Of course, COSMO is an amazing and wonderful site for young artists like me, I wish to congratulate Curtis on his appreciation and talents,

a warm and true poem .. spot on ..