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LOVE TRULY

LOVE TRULY

Who can expect anyone to understand the things they don't?

People with different hopes and different dreams...

Some want the best for you and for me...

Others don't...

They only want to serve themselves...

I may never reach the end...

What Story if any could you want to understand?

sparrowsong

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Bernadete van d...

Good old Moody Blues! Thank you for that lovely bird. I said before that
you're a romantic and you said something like "I don't know about that"!
Yes, I think you are. I am too, just love romantic music e movies. But
the funny thing is I rarely write love poems. Go figure! Well, my friend
stay well, be good, and get my hug.  B 

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Being Me

Moody Blues!! It's a lovely song isnt it?

As for your poem, what can I say? Love rides a river of uncertainties — so it helps if you're in the same boat to begin with. Have a really good day. Hugs x

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Nika Garden

Your poem reflects deep introspection on the complexities of human nature and motivations, leaving the reader with a sense of open-ended reflection. The abstract style invites interpretation, though adding more concrete imagery could further engage the audience.

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sparrowsong

Hello Bernadete...

Without a Spark it's Dream Land?

That's where I can be found a lot...

It's a heart thing if that makes sense...

I don't know what I what feel about it now with someone...

There are those who tell a lot and nothing is happening anything close to what they're saying...

Braggers...

Right?

Some had a short experience and they're just quiet...

There are those who have their 1 in 1,000,000,000...

There are some that'll add a few more 000 on the end...

​​​​They want to know the know...

You know?

As Meatloaf says...

Two Out of Three Ain't Bad...

​​​​​Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Being Me...

Wet Suit...

Life Jacket...

Bucket...

Towels...

If it's a Tippy...

Well...

Don't move much?

Thank you for your kind comment and support...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Thank you...

Have a Great Day...

Stay safe out there...

Hugs...

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sparrowsong

Hello Nika...

Concrete Imagery...

I thought that was what imaginations were for?

I will work on it...

Thank you for your kind comment and support...

Thank you for the Encore...

sparrowsong

 

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Shirley Harrison

I don't think anyone should go out of their way to prove what sort of person they are, because any real person looking  can see it without effort, if we pretend to be something else we only hurt ourselves by not being ourselves.  we are all different we are all unique. A wonderful discussion here. And a wonderful piece of music 🌹

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