Poem -
love you short time
men..
men who look at you discerningly
as they would for bubbles
in wallpaper
yet their own roles don't
match up
they say,
I don't only want you for sex
then do,
little else in the itenary
but fuck
and complain
well..this isn't a body suit
I'm wearing, I'm afraid it's me
it's a real woman
not some bint
you poured over in a book
real life is kind of real
give it a suck
Comments
Love these last couple of lines...but I've discovered that life has an unerring ability to suck itself!!
Excellent piece...as always.
J ;)
laughs out.. sometimes short verse packs a punch as you know..for instance and you will know it...that bit in Ceasor..where he says..You serve me a hot dish..cool...I love it ..you have to think..behind the line..I should pay more attention to detail..Im too much in a hurry ..like when I paint..I must finish it before the inspiration dies..and it does. ..thankyou kind sir..
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Well written and on point. Quality
thanks jick...I have read some of yours..but I can't remember which now...I'm going to attempt flowery writing..for a change..probably get lost in the jungle..xx