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N.g. Dian

Sure!Ā 

Ā thanks so much, Williamsji :)

Wow cool website, thanks for the link!

Regards,

N.G. Dian

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Jimmy Arnold

GreetingsĀ N.G.Dian,

As stated by William a powerful(HAIKU) poem that in a few strategicly aligned words,Ā that stands alone, small in stature but in meaning,meant to be the essence, of what oriental dreams, were once hinged upon, though now in its awake, remain the stains of, track blue, etched upon the sensual pearl canvas, known to be, that of her slender in statue face..... Nice (Haiku)!!!!! Ā keep it up!

Cheers,

JimĀ 

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N.g. Dian

Hello Jim, thanks so much for your interesting comment, and love your view about haiku :)

Cheers,

N.G. Dian

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N.g. Dian

Hello Jim, thanks so much for your interesting comment, and love your view about haiku :)

Cheers,

N.G. Dian

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Jimmy Arnold

N.G.

You are quite welcome and it is nice to see the short, sweet, powers of the (HAIKU) and just how a few(right) words, can speak volumes....You must write many more for the (HAIKU) in us all....Not that easy to write at all and still maintain that potency, in just a few words......

Regards remainĀ the kindest,

JimĀ 

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