Poem -
Loves Eternal Grace
Benevolent heart
With eyes that shine so bright
Amidst the shadows that lingerÂ
How youÂ
SubdueÂ
My troubled sight
Nourish my heavy soul
Who drags so many
broken dreams
Pluck me
As a flower
Who needs to flourishÂ
In your beams
Of lavender hues
That softly croon
My sanctuaryÂ
Your embrace
Where we becomeÂ
The essenceÂ
Of loves eternal grace
Art and Poem copyright Gwendoline 1/11/21
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Excellent poem
I loved it
Thank you so much my friend xÂ
Gwen your artwork.is stunning...it always inspires me to pick.up my paintbrush again then...I never do. Can't be arsed can't even write anymore, I'm forcing crap or I will never write again.
You!!! On the other hand are SHINING!!! A talented force to be reckoned with...I love your words my friend...more to the point I feel them and that...for me....is what poetry is....brilliant work xxx
I would so love to see your art Marion. I think you write from the heart and soul in your poetry. Which is something I think makes a poet truly a poet. I got the book we are published in. It landed today. Read your poem about Swansea and loved it. Thanks for always being so supportive of my poet and art my friend. I have very little confidence in the art side and always question if what I have done is any good. So thank you for your fab wordsÂ
Hugs xxxxÂ
This is one stunningly beautiful poem. Your artwork is also amazingly brilliant. Wow, how talented you are x
Thanks my talented friend, your words are always so encouraging xxÂ
Xx
You’re welcome my dear friend
WOW!!.......Smokin' grooves!!.....Smokin' ass grooves dear poet sister!!......I agree with Marion.......you CAN feel this write.....which is all set up by the BEAUTIFULLY presented artwork......such a great touch to be able to create your own artwork for a poem!!.......Most Excellent GWEN!!........most excellent!!........ALL STARS!!....... for its creative run at the heartstrings and emotions!!........Bravo!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!................T xo  : )
Hi Tony, thanks for your sparkling feedback on this one my friend. Always a pleasure to have you stop byÂ
Gwen x
.. for a moment, I felt stunned, for this is simply stunning Gwen .. such depth & feel to it ..
I swear it glowed lavender too behind these lids when later closed to savour ..
Neville ................................. :) x
Wow Neville such a beautiful response my friend, thank you ever so much. Hope your morning goes wellÂ
Gwen x :)
Becuz ya worth it Gwen ........................................................ & thank you too x
Gwen it reads almost like a religious hymn in places and no harm in that.
You could set your beautiful poem to music.
And another of your stand alone lovingly well written poems, each original and vibrantly fresh to discover and read and then reread.
And love your artwork accompanying this little bit of poetry heaven in flower form.
Your picture also seems subliminal with the flower standing out and high lighted, just adding that extra piece of magic for a reader, each complimenting the other and magnificently so.Â
Two beautiful written and painted piece's Gwen.
Shaun. x
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Wow thank you Shaun for these lovely kind words towards both my poem and painting. I admit the flower and it’s position are symbolic. Thank you for being so attentive. It means so much. It took me longer than normal to do this painting, because I just haven’t had much time with home schooling and life. So I am extra grateful for your enthusiasm towards it. Many many thanks and thanks for the pin too my friendÂ
Gwen xÂ
I love your artwork. You are amazingly talented in both art and writer. This poem shows it. The brilliance of Gwen's delicate hands and pure voice reaches us all. I think you have captured a most elegant piece. Always unique and so easy to read. Love it. Pxxx
Lots of love to you P xx and thank you for such kind and uplifting words. Many thanks for taking the time to look at some of my poems today. I am truly grateful xxxxÂ