Poem -
Loves Eternity
Spirituality, Ascension
Standing on the edgeĀ
Looking into all that is vast
Endless...
Potential forms
Born in front of my eyes
Ā
I watch your tempest riseĀ
in shades that cultivate the mindĀ
I feel fedĀ
on your sustenance
Your shineĀ
Beyond reasonĀ
and far beyond those shadows of doubtĀ
You sing the final songĀ
That which ignites all flames
that wish to manifest into the stuff of dreamsĀ
Where your reverent virtu streamsĀ
beamsĀ
redeemsĀ
the good in meĀ
I soften
I seeĀ
A universal purityĀ
From all that wasĀ
and all that shall ever beĀ
A boundless loveĀ
Caught in eternity
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Ooh Gwen, there is passion in this!! And elegance and a beautiful flow. I was going to say an awakening almost but then I saw it in your tag...I'm still going to say it though...beautiful write my friend Xx
Many many thanks Marion. So glad you could sense that awakening. Thank you for the wonderful words my friend xx
You are in tune with The Spirit Gwen, and I love sharing in your thoughts!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Jim I always enjoy your words, be in poetry or comments. You are too kind my friend, and I am humbled by your thoughtful feedback. Many thanks x
great poemĀ
wonderful poemĀ
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Thanks so very much my friend l, so glad you enjoyed x
Beautiful work
Thanks so very much John, I am thrilled to read your wonderful feedback. Thank you for liking this oneĀ
Gwen xĀ
this is very special Gwen, it has that feel to it .. made me shiver when I first read it .. inspired I imagine by one helluva guy who is, or was and maybe always will be, to say the very least, one helluva special guy .. x
Beautiful reaction to my poem Neville. Aināt no flies on you my friend. You are insightful and it is a wonderful gift. Many thanks my talented poet x
Wow Gwen. This is so beautiful to read. I had to read it twice! Utterly Sublime and spiritual. Love is everlasting. I feel it in this piece. Your true love with you for eternity. Pxxxšš½ššš
Thank you for your beautiful words my lovely friend. It is always such a pleasure to have you read my work š·ā¤ļø
It is in the eternity of love where one can find the extraordinary......I LOVE the feel that this piece is emanating......it has that spiritual aspect to it that elevates the whole of the poem as well as the love that is implied here.....absolutely fabulous poem GWENDOLINE!!.......ALL STARS! & PINNED!!......good luck to you in this love of yours!!.....well penned dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ :Ā )
Thanks Tony, your words are so kind and insightful as ever. Thanks for being you my lovely poetic friend. All the best to you and yoursĀ
Gwen x
Hi Gwen,
Exceptional - well done!
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Wow thank you Terry and Anne for these lovely wordsĀ
Gwen xx
It's impossible for an incurable romantic like me to remain indifferent to this poem.
A boundless love caught in eternity
I completely relate to this phrase. This is the love which I'm hostage by own will on this journey of souls. This is the love that completes and regenerates me, the one that has animated my soul since the beginning of time.
Well done Gwen !
Thank you so much Aires for your beautiful feedback on my poem. It is a wonderful hostage situation to be in š So happy you found the light in this and it spoke to youĀ
All the bestĀ
Gwen xĀ