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'Loves Labourer Lost'

'Loves  Labourer Lost'

Her head bowed low and wracked with shame
within  unhallowed ground.
A silent prayer through bitter lips escaped in hissing mockery.
Eyes cast to earth, unwilling to meet the gazes of  proud men.
This mans name, known, now blown, like dust  to
flights of no avail or salvation.
A soul with no intent to harm, but worked a mighty day.
Hard labourers hands too calloused to touch a silken skin,
yet ploughed the land lovingly.
Till nightfall came, then stirred the notions of failure.
The loss of work and pride, and all that made him whole.
Too great a loss, too shameful to see his childrens hungry eyes.
Too wracked to ever see a future, with him again at the helm.
The cold early morning mist, rising slowly over the dew bejewelled grass.
The solitary oak, majestic with its umbrous leaves and taunting permanence.
His final  days work, a coarse length of rope to hasten his demise..
Then shame no more…..
But for her?......for her?
Head bowed with bitter tears and angry silent words,
spoken only in her heart, as she crosses to the north side and says
farewell forever to her loved, but  lost, hero.

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StevieC

This really felt like a 19th century tale - beautiful yet sad  and  so simply told- lovely work Lodigiana !

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Scarlet

Just as StevieC says, its like a sad and enchanting novel extract. Beautifully written xxx

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lodigiana

Thanks so much Scarlet..It's so strange how  we come to write the things we do..this started hearing a song that had the words 'Hallowed ground' in and the thoughts just moved on from there- so pleased you enjoyed it hun ! xxx

Lodigiana

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Scarlet

You should consider writing a novel

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lodigiana

haha that would be far too many words for me...but how about a collaboration?

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Scarlet

That would be great!!! X

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

The horror of a Funeral with no one there...

Wonderful imagery...

Beautiful and sad write...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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lodigiana

Hi Sparrowsong , wasn't that a sad thing to do?  not only to lose a loved one tragically but to have the stigma of a burial in unconsecrated ground and all that suggests..I hope we are kinder these days....Thanks for your lovely words..Hugs xxx
Lodigiana

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lodigiana,

His pride convinced him of her prejudice
For it told him she'd lost respect
No work, no wages, no food to eat
His suicide, did he elect

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If he'd only told her of his pain
She'd have told him to "be it above"
But too ashamed, he took his life
Her "Labourer's" dear lost love

Love,
Larry xxx

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lodigiana

Thank you so much Larry for a lovely contribution xxx
Lodigiana 

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