Poem -
Love's Request
Situated on a bench of her discontent
Reflecting on life's many puzzles in her discerning mind
Dreaming of a day when euphoric feelings will capture love 's escape
Trying to keep hope alive with all of her insecurities buried deep inside
Thinking of him on this exquisite night
Will he ever love me again or kiss me good night
He loved me through my doubts and fears
He was always there to wipe away my tears
Relaxing and rethinking my life on this gorgeous purple sky
Longing for a sweet embrace of my love's request at this moment in time
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Enjoyed this so much ! A wonderful example of how willing you are to put emotion on to the page ! With great result !!!
All the best to you !
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Hey Richard. Always wonderful to see your comments on my Page . Glad you enjoyed this write. I rewrote twice before I posted it today . I was writing it from a woman's perspective. I loved the picture and the words just flowed out. Cheers hrl :)
It is good to hear about the effort and care you put into your poems ! It really shows !
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Thanks Richard for your support it means alot . Best wishes to you hrl
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GEEZ Hardrocklover!!.......I had no idea you were this good..........the way you painted the picture with words brought the whole thing to life poetically...........it has been a pleasure to watch you get better and better bro!,........I love the way you made her looking up into the purple sky REALLY come into lovely focus..........this is gorgeous man!!.........well done ALL STARS!!.........T xo
Hey t thanks for your comments bro . I wrote a rough draft first then I wrote the final draft this afternoon. I am getting picky about how my sound . I wrote it from the perspective of a woman. .Glad you enjoyed hrl . My last 3 writes were based on pictures too . Cheers hrl