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Love's violin

Love's violin

She stands and plays her violin of love 

Memories of her past haunting every note she plays 

Music is her way to cope and block out the pain with each note 

There is sadness in her eyes 

For her love is lost and won't materialize 

Her soul is crying out for love's appeal 

As she plays  each note hoping he will  hear and bring him back  for a grand reveal 

Waiting and wanting for her love's return 

She will keep playing her violin of love , still hoping her notes will bring her love back to stay

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Richard Waters

You are writing some very fine pieces concerning love and devotion ! This is one of the best !

Thanks for sharing my friend.  :)

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Bradford

Hey Richard this is write based upon the picture.  I just wrote what I thought she was feeling playing her violin . It is not based on anyone but my heart is a romantic one and I can tell she was hurting from  the pictures. Cheers and thanks for your comments hrl :) 

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Richard Waters

It is amazing the inspiration you can get from an image !!!

:)  All the best to you.

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Bradford

Thanks Richard all the best to you .hrl :) 

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Bradford

Hey Richard going to continue doing different writes . Hope you all like them cheers hrl

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Richard Waters

Looking forward to reading them very much !!!

Wishing you all the best in your endeavours ! :)

Take care ! :)

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Bradford

Hi cleo.  I loved the picture and the story just wrote itself . Hugs to you and thanks for your comments hrl 

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Honorable HRL, Bradford,

Great romantic verse, I love the below lines

As she plays  each note hoping he will  hear and bring him back  for a grand reveal 

Waiting and wanting for her love's return 

She will keep playing her violin of love , still hoping her notes will bring her love back to stay

Love & Hugs

Willy

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Bradford

Hi willy thanks those are my favorite lines as well.  Thanks for comments . Glad to always see you on my page ,. Cheers hrl 

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Abstract Venturi

I love this poem the most. I've always wanted a violin because of the sweet noise it brought to my ears. This poem perfectly embodies how I feel.

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Bradford

Hey abstract . Glad you enjoyed this write.  I felt her pain while she was playing in the picture and the poem wrote itself . Thanks for your comments hrl

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Devon La Porte

Hardrock I happen to agree with Richard this is one of your best ones or at least it is a favorite of mine. Great write I enjoyed these lines
"There is sadness in her eyes 

For her love is lost and won't materialize"
Well done iam impressed on how far you've come keep it up man my love and respect.

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Bradford

Hi Devon this was my first poem writing looking at a picture.  I saw the hurt in her soul as she played the violin of old . Wanting to see her lost love . This was fun to write.  Your comments mean a lot.  Thanks bro merry Christmas to you and your family hrl 

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