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Luck

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Kim Wal

Wish me luck in life and love

Wish my smile was more then enough

Compared to compassion LUCK is trivial

But it must count for somthing in the real world

I need somthing bright to scare the clouds away

Distained and distressed, luck may hopfully lead the way

Wish me luck in life and love

The chance at none is one to which I don't wish to end up

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Jimmy Arnold

Hello Kim,

"I need something bright to scare the clouds away"....really like this lines marriage to what could be heralded as a (bright sunny smile)......A deterrent to any clouds of grey...very good job.

Jim

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