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Jimmy Arnold

Hey Kitty,

Enjoyed this write immensely and send all my condolences, if they need be in order...Powerful acceptance of the love of life and its most precious of content,(family member), (lost in flesh), to us here on earth but (surrendered) to others of our family, up in heaven, inwhich she, (just as her beloved departed family members before her), (who waited on her), now awaitss with open arms and hands, in heaven for our home coming as well.....Very well explained and written.....

Jim

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Cass Lopez

I am the one going to Heaven…But thank you so much for your comment…its very sweet and I appreciate it greatly. It shows to me how much people care.

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Jimmy Arnold

You are welcome Kitty,

(One), of many good aspects of poetry, is being able to convince and sale the reader, in believing in the product you deliver and in this case and from my stand point, you have done just that, in this piece of poetic art and for this to be fictitious, i would just say...Job well done Kitty and honestly glad, it was. Keep writing Kitty and don't be planning on utilizting that epitah quite yet,  your poems are well enjoyed and i am sure, many more of them,(at this calaber), is expected by your readers...

Jim

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