Poem -
Luscious Kiss
FINALE Part 3
kissing luscious lips
fused furiously hot
tastes like melting cherries
and a fresh lavender shot
each breath intensifies
ravenously fired up
erupting lips into ecstasy
under the rising sun
Like 6 Pin it 3Thank you for following my mini series. It was certainly a challenge to write parts 2 and 3 as it needed to follow the first. It has broaden my writing skills as it's not a genre I write about. I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did creating it. With love
Px
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Hello P, once again a beautiful short.
“tastes like melting cherries
and a fresh lavender shot”
wow these lines just really are flavoursome and stunning. Lavender having such meanings as “devotion” and “purity” I think you ended this kiss on a spiritual high my friend
Wonderful
Gwen ❤️x
Pratibha, I see it now, the complete picture, in what you want and have achieved through all three parts.
You start with the moon, then the stars and your finale is the rising sun.
Love is continually everywhere on this beautiful blue planet regardless the time or place.
And well done and brilliantly conceived and so cleverly delivered and written
You choose not to think outside the box, the poetry box that is, but think outside the poetry box making factory.
And thank heavens for doing so, for you offer to so many to try to aim a little higher and do poetic things a little differently and explore certain avenues. To stimulate a reader making them pause and reflect.
And your way of thinking, hopefully, may rub off on them and do things a little differently when writing, off kilter so to speak.
Brilliant, beautiful and beguiling your whole trilogy was to read and then between its lines and your message is not lost on this poet my friend.
Thank you for writing something special and many poets sparkle while only a few shine.
And you shine Pratibha and oh so brightly.❤️
Wow Shaun just wow for the huge compliment. The way you explained it is amazing. No one can tell it how it is than another poet who can write amazing lines like you.
I really appreciate it thank you my friend. Really made my day when I read all 3 of your comments.
So my final ends on a high 😁
Look fwd to reading your amazing writes. Will email you as well. Px
Pratibha and well done again a damned good trilogy and a captivating read all three. x.
Thank you Shsun. 😘😘😘
kiss kiss kiss
Will definately like to write more mini series
Px
Who's Shsun? Sounds like a Japanese drink!
If alcoholic, make mine a double!!😁
Could even be a Bond villain.
Wow! Looks like I`m late for the party once again. Though to return the favour when reading my Lost Man series, I`m definitely going to read all of them now. So, P, I must say that your poetry always seems so polished and pronounced in transforming words into feelings. I think this poem is no exception to that rule! The phrases like; tastes like melting cherries, really brings out the emotions. And I`m left asking, how do you come up with such stanzas that are effortless and original. I guess a talented poetess has its ways. Truthfully enjoyed this one P. Amazing.
Wow thank you Max! I hadnt realised you had commented on all 3 parts! I just replied to part 1.
Thank you for reading these and giving your feedback.
well to answer your question I really I had work on following the same style as part 1! I ended up looking up popular scents for men and women to help to choose and write my line!!
internet full of info!!
I have had a massive amount of comments on this series via the fb group I had first posted it on.
I really had no idea that pink kiss would be a sensation.
I dont know what happened max..I write part 1 so effortlessly. It just worked. The short lines.
thanks max coming from u and other poets about this mini series has really opened my eyes...what I have created is purely original and nothing like anything out there 🙏🏽😁💜💜💜
so grateful to friends like u. Px
Brilliant love...really enjoyed Xx
Thank you Marion. My 3 mini series. What a challenge the last 2 parts were to make it sing in tune like the first. I'm so pleased with it though. My most compact piece ever. Thank you reading them. Pxxx
You did a great job. Lovely to read your poem in the anthology. I am in another also...it's called The Post Box...in the Garden Of Neuro
pure of heart anthology. It was written for the little ones about a very real post box in which we post letters to heaven in the garden. All the little things...they help P ...hugs X
Oh wow Congratulations!! I dont know of the post box one in the garden on neuro. I look fwd to it. But I am in their first anthology which will be out very soon.
So glad u joined the garden too. It's been so different and so good. Px
wonderful!
Thank you poetess darkly
Did you get to read parts 1 and 2 and well? Xx