Poem -
mad about you "obsessed"
Yes its true
I'm still in love with you
Its madness
Cause all you brought was sadness
You had an affair which i was aware
But didn't want to acknowledge it
Wanted to move on I admit
Could we try again?
Or just stay friends?
I love you everyone can tell
I'm under your spell.
I don't want to be your ex anymore
Don't want you with that whore.
Too sick and weak to move on
This is my only option
I know im obsessed like I'm possessed.
You know how I feel about you,
Hopefully one day you'll feel the same too
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Comments
reads like it's coming straight from the heart, Stacey Ann cranston, good flow and tempo as well...I'm not sure if it deserves an R rating; might scare off some 'timid' readers, just saying...a solid write that I enjoyed, cheers poet, good to read you
Everything you write is excoriatingly honest...like you're just transcribing thoughts as they occur to you.
It's refreshing...it's powerful...and, at time, uncomfortable to read (in a good way!).
Love is like a potent drug released into the bloodstream; if you don't find somewhere to put it, someone or something to spend it on...it begins to burn...and eventually, it can destroy you from the inside.
Maybe pouring it out onto the page will help...I don't know (it never did for me!).
Soave sia il vento,
J ;)