Poem -

Made It Through

Made It Through

I've built so many walls,

Trying to run from you.

Given stress and aggrevation,

In everything i do.

You strung me out,

I buried it deep.

People make promises,

They don't intend to keep.

Time has gone by,

Now I'm stronger from the hurt.

You had me laying at your feet,

But i got up and brushed off the dirt.

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Debbi  I relate to your 
write. You take so much and cant take no more
Glad at the end you stopped taking  the unhappiness
he/she gave you 
great first write welcome to Cosmo 
Best wishes Debs 
 

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Larry Ran

Hi Debbi,

Sounds like you needed a "shovel" instead of a "brush".  Glad to see you standing strong again.  Happy to welcome you to cosmo!  Keep sending us these heartfelt stories.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Eden Van der Nest

Powerful write Debbi, I can relate! 

Keep writing, I can tell you have so much more to share.

Well done 

Eden 

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author
RecklessOnPaper

Thank u so much guys :) everyone on this site is so friendly and nice I'm so glad I became a part of it :) 

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author
sparrowsong

Hello Debbi...

Did you look at and give it a...

Raspberry like sometimes I do?

Great write!

Way To Go!

Glad you are here and...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Debbi...

CONGRATULATIONS! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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