Poem -
mailbox...
(the box collection: no.3)
I don't sleep much these days
so I send you text messages and emails
till your inbox is full, with just my name
will you leave me on read again?
I don't sleep much through the nights
so I write you little postcards and letters
till your mailbox is full, with my pen and paper
will you return them to me again?
I don’t sleep
so I write
to you
.
.
.
zZz
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Comments
this wasn't supposed to be as dark as it turned out...but now it has...lol
inspired by craig hawkins' art series -Â 'box series'
http://www.craighawkinsart.com/box-series.html
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I actually find this one quite calming, perhaps it's the causal conversational tone. Either way awesome write. TFOTSÂ
Interesting...see that's why it's always good to hear and see someone else's POV. There is always another side to the story that sometimes even the writer might miss...you really made me give this one a second thought. Lol ❤ thanks for the read fish!
Unique to me but simply sweet and as fish said ..calm...all smiles
Wow, there really is another side to this (what I thought was a dark and depressing) write! ❤❤ hehehe thanks for the read and the lovely words Lorris
Awww... I picture a desperate soul scribbling his/her heart out to someone who really doesn't care. Soooo sad x
Yes! This is the sad feeling I suddenly felt as I was nearing the end of this write too! Yay, I'm not alone in my sadness lol ❤ thanks for the read and stars BM! ❤❤
If this were true feeling then the receiving end would have been very annoyed. Hope you continue composing with your talent.
Hahaha yeah it's definitely annoying behaviour. Maybe the receiving end finds it difficult to reply back now. Who knows...
Sometimes it's healthy to answer someone back immediately, before it turns into something unhealthy...we never know till we answer or get answers. Hahaha ❤❤ thanks for the words of encouragement and for stopping by Han X)Â