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Making changes

Making changes

I made a time machine
Followed the directions I found on a Reddit thread
I plan to rewrite my history
Make some changes and clear my head
I went back to 1985
Told my mother about my dads car accident
So she would stop him
And I would have them both in my present
But when I got back
I couldn't find my mother anywhere
I had to find my dad
And when I did I heard my worse fear
He told me
They were fighting over him going to work that day
And she got fed up
And stormed out the house in a rage
She left quickly
She was booking it on her bike
She got hit by a car
Crossing the street under a traffic light
Even though I missed my father
I wouldn't trade my mother to have him
So I hugged him tight
And I told him I loved him
And I said I'd be back later and we can chill
Got in my time machine and went back
I had to fix this
I had to put my life back on track
I showed up and told my self what changed
And not to talk to my mother
He agreed 
We need to recover
He went back 
And when I got there I destroyed the time machine
This was a pointless mission
That only added to my suffering
Life lesson learned
Something's are better left alone
Now that my eyes are open
And I'm going home

By LukeCoomer © 

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sparrowsong

Hello Luke...

We can play things over and over in our minds...

The things that could have been different could have changed the course and not necessarily for the better...

Great write and message...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Luke Coomer

Sparrowsong

thanks for gracing my page with wonderful comments, glad the message was well received this one hurt a little to pen out

-luke-

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Rosetta Abatematteo

I like the concept of time travel and always have.A fascinating subject and thank you for sharing.

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Luke Coomer

Rosetta

no thank you for reading! This is my heart and soul I bleed on the pages, and I love the time travel what ifs too

-luke-

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Tony Taylor

Hey LUKE!!.......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered.......even a time machine does not have the power of the words you've written here........they will long be remembered brother!!........ALL STARS!!.......Love and ROCKETS!!!........T xo,,,?✳✴☀

 

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Luke Coomer

Tony

your the man bro! lol every time I think I'm flying under the radar you jump in and stir up my ego, I hope someday other people will be as excited about my life's work as you are sir..

thanks again for taking the time lol

pun intended

-luke-

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