Poem -

MAN IN THE WHITE COAT

The man in the white coat is heading my way
Was the same thing that happened yesterday 
He's here to make sure I don't self harm 
To cause a fight or set off any kind of alarm 

The man in the white coat carries my pills
Don't like the blue ones give me the chills
Must remember to take three of red 
If forgotten I will finish up completely dead 

The man in the white coat never smiles 
Thinks he's important carrying my files 
Wish he'd do one just disappear and go 
For I consider him to be a right so and so

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Gwendoline

Hello Kieran, 
I could really feel the inner struggle within this piece. To have to tolerate someone who treats them inferior almost. There is a sense of a soundless scream. A frustration towards life and that man in a white coat. I liked the emphasis on this person throughout the piece. It gave a good sense of the dragging repetition this person brings to the other.

A good write. Thank you for sharing :)  ⭐️ 

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