Martyrs
I love you so much; I sent you my Son!
Knowing this plan; that hearts would be won.
Having your agency, I sent you my word.
Listened for your questions; few prayers were heard.
I gave you examples of service and love,
Sent prophets the martyrs from heaven above.
They were stoned for the message sent from Me!
Most; never listened to their infinite plea.
Now using guns as the weapon of choice,
Destroying those trying to hearken My voice!
You can blame stones or guns for the wrong,
My wrath is still kindled all the day long!
Accountability will be measured, pure judgement done,
By the merciful Savior; The Atoning One.
Blaming guns and stones for the villainous part,
Actually, it is lack of charity in thine own heart.
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What a powerful write this is my friend.....so VERY well constructed that the rhymes come quite trippingly off of the tongue......And the message itself....slakes the thirst of he who seeks the truth in the spiritual and wishes to add strength to his foundation of faith in the here & now!!...."Martyrdom" does does precisely that.....or at least that is my most humble opinion/impression of this VERY well crafted poem!!.....PINNED!!.....Bravo dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
thank you Tony for your wonderful assessment and support my friend!
This has been very well written Jim. It's a great poem and one that makes you stop a while to have a think on things x
thank you Tina! that is the aim, and I thank you for reading!
Great write
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hearts right back at you Jill my friend!
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thank you Liliana my great friend!
thank you Greg my friend!
So true, lack of charity in the heart, love for others, Will the Savior finds us lacking.
thank you Shirley for reading and your on point comment!
Wow Jim and I mean Wow this is simply splendid to read and captivating in its message/theme.
You held me entranced with your words and beautiful rhyme scheme and after rereading the beat and flow is perfect metering.
And your powerful message is the heartbeat and essence as well in equal measure.
I agree, share your sentiments and thoughts my friend and choose never to lose sight of them.
A beautiful poem you have so kindly shared that is beautifully balanced throughout and never trips up or lets go, not a word fails in its desired impact or its strong expression.
Robustly, beautifully and brilliantly written and presented and five simple stars seems an understatement to offer.
Thanks Jim and you have made my night sir.
thank you Shaun for your kind words, for reading and continued support ! it means more than you know!;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;Jim....PS.......................................... .."charity never fails"!
thank you Baker street! enjoying your stories of wisdom!
A wonderful read Jim for everyone regardless of preferences of faith or religious belief, I always admire faith...and well written poetry ...hugs x
back at you Marion, your latest post knocked my socks off! and I consider it faith!
Your faith shines in this write Jim, beautifully crafted. You have really created an impactful message and kept the flow perfectly in your structure of this wonderful write x
your assessments Gwen are most valuable to me! thank you for reading and your wonderful comments!
wonderful poem
thank you Greg, my wonderful brother!
thank you Hj!