Maybe One Day
Caught in clouds of dust filled hopes
I drag these weighted dreams which hold no meaning...for they have lost their gleam
I sit within a timeless choke, detached from waking life
I have broke my will inside to try and dive into that ever transforming ocean
Its turbulent waves crave my existence...yet I shall not risk another intrepid dip into its alluring waters
For I have weary bones,
which creak and rattle from all the battles thrown, and blown my way
Focususing through this aimless mist of echoed mornfulness
I resist anymore downhill thinking
Leave the sinking ship to its ill fate
I'll cast a new net with fresh bait
Then maybe the waters shall finally surface
The clarity my mind has sought to find
Maybe then I will gain the means to make new dreams
Where I might find the strength inside, to dip a toe into a gentle wave
Savour some of life's real flavour...yes maybe one day... I'll be brave
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Comments
wow what wonderful poem
i love the photo
Many thanks 😊 x
Hope you manage to be brave. This is an outstanding poem Gwen...from the 1st line to the last x
Wow thank you my friend for your lovely kind words and support. So pleased you liked this one, and thanks for the pin too ❤ x
It is so pin worthy! Fabulous writing, I really mean it xx
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Oh WOW Gwen...I read a glimmer of hope inside this deep write. A step towards a better lighted place. Your soul pours in these words you have so movingly written...I love this Gwen, I also love that hope and love are ever present just waiting for a time when we can open our eyes again...beautiful Gwen...hugs 💖💖💖
Thank you lovely for your wonderful words. Yes I need to be braver and more confident. I loved reading your feedback here, you totally got it 💖💖💖
This poem IS bravery!... manifested in the poetic!!........the sense of longing and quiet patience is BEAUTIFULLY illustrated here......and delivered with the elegance of one deep in the thoughts and the ramifications of portent & possibility!!.......Great work dear poet sister!!........your cyber-friend and ever admirer.......T xo : )
Gosh Tony, such wonderful feedback. I couldn't ask for anything better. Thank you for seeing more in me than I do myself my friend, for always being so supportive and encouraging. I am always so very grateful to read your feedback
Your poetic buddy
Gwen :) x
I hope, your hope, your wish and plea is eventually realised Gwen .. and the fact you posted it here for all to see, serves as a permanent reminder of how you must think, feel and be .. for yes you got it .. all eternity ..
Sorry couldn't resist .. sometimes, my imagination takes a breather and then the pen takes over ..
A smashing, both elegant & refined read this mane with my toast and marmalade, that is .. if you don't mind me saying so ..
Neville :)
Neville I am so sorry I didn't see this. Thank you my friend for your encouraging words. I like marmalade on toast too, especially if the bread is homemade and fresh
Thanks for being such an active member here on cosmo, your poetry and comments are so appreciated and enjoyed :)
Really pleased you liked this one
as always, my pleasure & thank you too Gwen :)
awesome write that I can so relate! love that courage! thank you for helping us all with expression of thought!..........................Jim
Hello Jim, many many thanks for dropping by and reading my poems. It is always such a pleasure to find your feedback. So glad you liked this piece and thank you for the pin
Gwen x
Gwen reads like a dream and where would we be without our dreams?
Those we see when asleep and those we aspire to when awake.
Another beautiful write and one never expects anything less from you my friend and this piece is right up there with so many more you share.
I wish you well Gwen and thank you for writing absolute poetry class and a poem that softly lingers.
Your friend, Shaun.x.
Shaun, many many thanks for reading this one, and for your wonderful feedback that always lifts the spirit of the writer, for you are such a kind and supportive soul here on cosmo. Thank you my friend x