Poem - 09 October 2017, 12:35 Meaningless Sambit Kumar Pradhan A pained, lettered paper, Slashed its vein, bled ink, Remains alive but a blank. Like 1 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1364 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Brevity Pain Suicidal Poetry Genre: Freestyle Narrative Romance Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
linda wright09 October 2017, 12:48 cool poem linda j wright wrote new one first day of school kindergarten take a look thanks Reply
Jason Brown09 October 2017, 13:14 Powerful image...with a stultifying last line!! It's a testament to the Triveni form, and to your gift as a poet, that thisĀ Hindi form works so beautifully in English too. Thank you for sharing it with us here on Cosmo. J ;) Reply
Sambit Kumar Pradhan09 October 2017, 19:58 A very interesting interpretation Jason! And shukriya so much for your appreciation of the form and my humble efforts. Sincerely appreciated! :) Reply
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cool poem linda j wright wrote new one first day of school kindergarten take a look
thanks
Shukriya so much Linda!
Powerful image...with a stultifying last line!!
It's a testament to the Triveni form, and to your gift as a poet, that thisĀ Hindi form works so beautifully in English too.
Thank you for sharing it with us here on Cosmo.
J ;)
A very interesting interpretation Jason!
And shukriya so much for your appreciation of the form and my humble efforts. Sincerely appreciated! :)