Medusa

for my love
These idol fascinations now illicit
no idle stirrings (dormant) from within
But scorch with sweet sensation of hot kisses
like branding-irons drawn across my skin.
No idle stirrings dormant from within
Protruding cold-stone spears of aching need
Like branding-irons (drawn across my skin)
A nightmare creatureβs taming as the seed.
Protruding cold-stone spears of aching need
move strangely in the light as shadows writhe
A nightmare creatureβs taming was the seed
and authoress of such marble-menβs demise.
Yet, strangely in the light as vipers writhe
Such tender hooks draw in where men are broken
The authoress of these marble-menβs demise
Her nightmare kiss ~ enticing and unspoken.
The tender hooks sink deep where men are broken
And scorch with sweet sensation of hot kisses
Her nightmare kiss ~ enticing and unspoken
An idol fascination; now illicit.

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Comments
Hey JASON!!..... what was so cleverly established here (for me) was the continuity of remaining detached........ not easy to do ........but necessary........ the brilliance lies in its descriptively haunting power of invulnerability .........leaving room form some kick ass phrases...... cool stuff........ enjoyed the read brother poet.........ALL STARS!!.. high fives!?.......T xo. ?β³β΄β
Thanks Tony.
For your kind words and insight.
J ;)
its brilliant!! I truly loveΒ this! you have an exquisite way with words and you truly know how to pique the readers imagination... xxx :DΒ
Thanks Lorna ... glad your imagination was piqued!!
J xxx
Such a gripping piece...You're always a pleasure to read!!
awesome write!
Superb piece of work J. I'm sure it took a lot of time to construct.
Delightful read........Mick.
Beautiful imagery, pleasure to read βΊ