Memories

Mist filled mosaic.
Colours unborn,
Or bornβ¦
then forgotten.
Fogged windows
Into the past,
Steamed by moments,
upon moments upon moments.
Fluttering echoes.
Scents on the breeze.
Just about there,
ghostly remembrances.
Foundations overlooked, yet strong.
Flashing scenery.
Forge ahead.
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Great poem wonderfully craftedΒ
Thank you Edward :)
Shout out to Robert Cornelius who owns the picture I put on this poem
I just love his work :)
http://www.robertcorneliusphotography.com/
Hey SALI!!....this is VERY unique..... with these rapid fire and succinctly delivered images coming at the reader and creating an 'otherworldly' feel & tone.... which is a perfect choice when dealing with the subject matter of "Memories"......I haven't read much of your stuff lately!!.....I pray all is well with you and yours my friend!!......ALL STARS!!......VERY creative write dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?β΄β€?
Thank you so much, Tony!
Always look forward to your comments and insight,
I've just been super busy and haven't been feeling 100 per cent lately so I didn't feel up to writing.
Hopefully, I can keep improving :)
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Beautiful poetry Mitsali.
I love this piece.
Thank you so much :)
Very beautifully craftedΒ
Thank you GregΒ :)
In simple tones might true meaning lie,
by the words of wisdom leaking quickly by.
Marvelous, Darling, Simply marvelous. I'm glad you got the message so many here on cosmo seem to forget, including myself. More words do not, in fact, mean more power. The simple double-couplet scheme is a wonderful way to express beauty, emotion, and your interpretation of the mind. Splendidly done.
Also, Message me when you can, I replied yesterday after getting internet hooked up finally. I'm not just ignoring you, promise.
-Dmitri
Oops, missed this!
Thank you so much :)
Mitsali, you have to know how beautiful I find your work. You dear poetess are a true talent!
Thank you, Lisa!
Like, I really appreciate you :)
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