Poem -

midnight train

midnight  train

walking round the city
need to rest my head
took the midnight train
to get to my bed
sleeping on the way
train chugging on the track
had a strange dream
everything went black
creeping up behind me
breathing down my neck
was a vampire so evil
all my blood he did take
drained and pale
my heart nearly stopped
till i heard a strange sound
from a loud alarm clock
so jumping out of bed
thinking"what the hell?"
i was on a train
when i collapsed and fell
bumps and cuts all over my head
and a vampire bite 
on my neck they said
dream or not
no more midnight train
transylvanian   trip
was the one to blame

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Tina Moore

thanks susan  glad you like it  tina x

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Magdalena

I love a vampire write.  Great picture and poem. :)

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Tina Moore

thank you very much poppy  glad you enjoyed    tina x

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Jai Masters

Tina,  dis one was scary; was that the 

intent? What's the deeper meaning? 

Why? A poem with questions 

to answer is wonderful to read,

fELt romantic too, great image as 

well!

smiLes Jai 

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Tina Moore

aww thanx jai ,love your comments .it was actually from when i was younger ,a memory of watching a vampire movie .i woke up (true) with two freckles on my neck beside each other lol  it scared me but everyone just laughed lol .i went on the train to stay with my grandparents ,so i guess partly it made a poem .thanx  jai  :)   tina x

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Evrod Samuel

very funny .....ill have to book a ride on that train....I wonder if the vampire will ask before he eats..lol...good write

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Tina Moore

LOL  thanx evrod ,il get you a free pass!!  and a choice of vampire lol   tina x 

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Tina Moore

lol,thanks chris  glad you think that:)   tina x

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