midnight train

walking round the city
need to rest my head
took the midnight train
to get to my bed
sleeping on the way
train chugging on the track
had a strange dream
everything went black
creeping up behind me
breathing down my neck
was a vampire so evil
all my blood he did take
drained and pale
my heart nearly stopped
till i heard a strange sound
from a loud alarm clock
so jumping out of bed
thinking"what the hell?"
i was on a train
when i collapsed and fell
bumps and cuts all over my head
and a vampire bite
on my neck they said
dream or not
no more midnight train
transylvanian trip
was the one to blame

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Comments
nice one tina much enjoyed cheers x
thanks susan glad you like it tina x
I love a vampire write. Great picture and poem. :)
thank you very much poppy glad you enjoyed tina x
Tina, dis one was scary; was that the
intent? What's the deeper meaning?
Why? A poem with questions
to answer is wonderful to read,
fELt romantic too, great image as
well!
smiLes Jai
aww thanx jai ,love your comments .it was actually from when i was younger ,a memory of watching a vampire movie .i woke up (true) with two freckles on my neck beside each other lol it scared me but everyone just laughed lol .i went on the train to stay with my grandparents ,so i guess partly it made a poem .thanx jai :) tina x
very funny .....ill have to book a ride on that train....I wonder if the vampire will ask before he eats..lol...good write
LOL thanx evrod ,il get you a free pass!! and a choice of vampire lol tina x
WOW!!
lol,thanks chris glad you think that:) tina x