Poem -
Mind Mischief.
Drink up I say
There's no other way.
All these voices in my head
Will they be silent when I'm dead?
“...But she was only messing around,
Please, no more playing with my mind...”
Barkeep, Vodka with ice blocks
My life is on the rocks!
(I think I’ll kiss him...)
Another shot of that Jim!
“...Go with Mr. Right just for once,
No more mischief with my mind...”
You there! Share that bong!
Hey DJ! Turn up that song!
“...NO MORE GETTING IT WRONG,
I’LL BE FROZEN HERE ON...”
I know I'm drunk
But I don't give a funk!
All these voices in my head
Will they be quiet when...
Like 4 Pin it 0“...IF FOREVER, WE'LL SEE,
BUT NO MORE GUESSING FOR ME.”
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Comments
It isn't easy to capture disparate voices in a work of poetry. It's accomplished, not with a change of formatting (though that helps the eye), but with a change of tone, meter and style. Something which you pull off with aplomb here.
A triumph!!
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J ;)
Hey HEIDI!!...... this is VERY cool....... and takes a chrome plated heart to pull this off....... the thoughts at the bar so easy to relate to (a bong hit after drinking is going to f**k you up) the voices will quell themselves..... but the video added that ambiance so key to the whole....... tough being a woman in that scenario........ the do's and don'ts eating away at you....... hell......I could have misinterpreted the whole thing......... but I enjoyed the read....... and "Tame Impala" is new to me.........ALL STARS!!....... fun stuff........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?✳✴☀