Mind Mutt
A crazy night
A crazy fight
Dark place
Dark face
ON
NO LIGHTS
Dazed
Hazed
CONFUSED
Lost
Cost
PAID IN FULL
Thoughts
laid to rest
cots
DAMAGED
put to bed
ALERT, ALERT
All I see is
RED
Ambition
DEAD
Hanging on
by a THREAD
WORDS said
other ones
UNSPOKEN
REGRET
THREATS
Within
AMIDST
Myself
WHO KNOWS
Caught
in a MOMENT
of TIME
STUCK
LUCK GONE
wrong
SONG
THE BEAT OF DEFEAT
My theme song
LOVE DONE
LOVE DRUNK
PUNK
DUNK your SOUL
PAIN
DRAIN
SANE OUT
ABUSED
USED
CUT LOOSE
At sea
LIFE A
SHIPWRECK
TIMEOUT
STOP
DROP
PRIDE
HIDDEN
TRUST is TOUGH
VULNERABILITY
FORBIDDEN
Attempts to forgive
ACCEPTED
BUT NEVER
APPROVED
Living BITTER
QUITTER
KNOT
TIED UP
EMOTIONS
POTIONS
SPAT OUT
YOUR MOUTH
CLEAN UP
MOUTHWASH
DROWN
SOAK
CLEANSE
THE PAST
the PRESENT IS a
GIFT
LIFT YOURSELF
UP
NEVER LOOK DOWN
Ground
SOUND
HEARD
LiStEn
SHOUT
DEFEND
LEND
SEND
OUT
MESSAGES
Set SAIL
BAIL
NEGLECT
REJECT
BOMB
ExPlOdE
Shattered
to pieces
BROKEN
DISMISSED
PISSED OFF
LIFE SWITCH
ON/OFF
FiNiShEd
LIFT OFF
3....2....1.....
COUNTDOWN
Time ticks
Time takes
Never does it
GIVE
SO LIVE IT UP
SHIT SERVED
PINCHED NERVES
SHIT HAPPENS
Don’t TAKE it
PERSONAL
REALITY
NEVER
SOMETHING
DIFFERENT
SCARS
STARS
GUIDED LIGHT
INTERNAL FIGHT
NIGHTS SKY
DARK MIND
REWIND
RE-LIVE
GIVE-IN
GIVE-UP
Back Now
BACK THEN
F👎🏻CKED UP
THUMBS UP
NOSE DOWN
EYES CLOSED
DANGEROUS
YES/NO
CONFIRMED
LIFE IS DANGEROUS
WITHIN A MIXED MIND
MUTT
VALUES MIXED UP
MORAL COMPASS
STOPPED
NO DIRECTION
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This is actually brilliant. The structure itself really brings to life the jumbled ups and downs this piece stresses on. I liked how some words you capitalised some of the letters for example in LiStEn and FiNiShEd. This really weighted these moments for the reader, which brought to life the emotions running through this post. Life can definitely take you down this road
Keep going my friend x
Thanks Gwen! I’m so glad you enjoyed , this used to be how I wrote all my poems back in the day .... so a little throwback style for me . I’m glad it resonated and you approved :) As your opinion, feedback and support weighs heavy as always ;)