Poem -
Mind over Body
My mind always on the go, always on the run,
But my body set in stone, frozen, not moving no life.
My mind always trapped in a personal hell,
this is a different type of oppression, even if life seems complete and swell.
I know that this life of mine could be worse but I can't help but let mind think,
it can be better, it should be better.
Will my mind ever be at peace or do I need to be on my way in the hearse,
to the final destination of six feet under to find peace.
To those I'd leave behind there sadness would cross my mind butÂ
it also hopes they could witness the madness within this mind I've come to resent so much.
A.L.S
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I call it our spirit overpowering our body, that is our test. We fast once a month for 24 hours, and give what we would have spent to the welfare of others. we pray at the beginning and end of our fast for someone else or what we need. that fast denies the body and our spirit once again can take full control.I thought this might help! nice write! all the best!................................Jim
Thank you for this insight!
Wow. What a deeply resonating write. I think we can all relate to a feeling of unrest, I know I for one sure can!!! But hey, the way one poet got me to look at it was to focus all my pent up energy in one direction and create something out of it!!! I really enjoyed this read and its structure, don't give up Amber, because this was fantastic!!!!!!!! (there is never enough exclamation marks...) Smiles. The Fish of the Sea
Thank you so much, I appreciate this a lot!
Hey Amber. Incredible write on such a deep emotional feeling. Not easy to deal with and definately not easy if you dont know you going through it. Keep writing to let those emotions out. best way forward. so amazing for the mind to release and find some inner peace. Pxx
Thank you, means a lot!