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Mind the gap

When we first met 
No problem seemed evident yet 
Nothing mattered
A fog of love and laughter .
The future seemed so bright
They were wrong and we were right .
Love would conquer all .
Every obstacle , before it
would fall .

But advancing years bought home truths 
The gap widened every time we looked .
The mirror didn’t lie 
Nothing can halt father time.
Now his best days are a distant haze
And I’ve become a carer in subtle ways 
Rather than being an partner .

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Chris Bond

Thank you Liliana , hoping you are keeping well and keep writing the great poetry :) x

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Being Me

Relationships evolve and change through the years. You need that undying love at the beginning ming to see you through to the end. I love the way you explored this so poetically x

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Chris Bond

Good evening and sorry I've taken a while to reply . I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and hope you maybe find some of my other works interesting ! Wishing you a happy day :)

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