Poem -
Mirror
I stare at you broken glass
Closer I try
Still and unspoken
Your reflection in my eye
What broke you so full
so raw
into something so small
i still see the beauty in all of your flaw
I see the damage been done
Your scared to the bone
I fear your mistake
Was the light that youve loan
You only we're honest
you pictured the truths
but I fear they couldn't handle
your digging of roots
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I can feel the tragic loss within the melancholy of this piece!!...... the recognition of a broken soul....... BEAUTIFULLY delivered CHLOE!!......ALL STARS!!.......LOVE AND ROCKETS!!......T xo ??✴❤❤✴???
Ps. I really like the collage of the broken glass as representation here!!
Thank you very much! It was very much the point I was trying to portray in this as the glass the broken soul. Thank you for you time and vote much appreciated.
chloe~
Hi Chloe,
First of all, congratulations on your nomination as "Poet of the Month".
Your powerful poem, "Mirror", inspired me to write one of my own.
Thank you for your inspiration.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hi larry,
your kind words are much appreciated. And thank you so much for the time to read and comment! Taken by surprise with the positive feedback and the inspiration it has had on you. Will be sure to read yours!
Love chloe~