Poem -
The Mirror Of My Insecurities
Gazing into the mirror of my discontent
Seeing the gloom as I look in at me
Why do I feel the way I do ?
She may say something I take the wrong way
Then I feel under the weather the whole day long
Unleash this burden that grips me now
I know why I feel like I do but there is nothing she can do
The mirror offers no hope I can see
Still standing looking at my insecurities
One day soon this may pass away
But for by now I am afraid to tell her how sad I feel some days
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Wow Hardrocklover!!..........this is gorgeous.........and SO easy to relate to........I think most people can relate to that face looking back at you in the mirror..........it's funny, I had a long conversation about this very same subject of being insecure earlier today.........funny how that works..........well done bro!!.........Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Hey t we all have our own insecurities . writing is way to let all your emotions out that you are feeling at a specific moment in time . I am glad you said this was gorgeous . some people would not know what to say . Thanks for your support hugs to you bro . Rock
Hardrock definitely see the improvement of your writing within this poem. Sometimes I can't explain why iam depressed or upset about what iam not to my wife, I feel like I will be misunderstood but then sometimes it is good to open up about those thingsI guess it depends. I also know we resilient can work through the sadness and get over it. Cheers on a good relatable write.
Hey Devon . This poem took all my insecurities and left out for everyone to see . I know alot of people can relate to pain and hurt . I know I have had my share and still hurts deep. Thanks for your comments. Hrl