Poem -
Miss Unacceptable
Like 7 Pin it 0“Because of insecurities she spent all of her money,
On lip fillers, hair extensions, facelifts and tucking her tummy,
All she ever wanted was to be cared for and loved,
All she ever got was to be beaten and shoved,
To the ground her head pointed, To the ground her eyes saw,
For her lips told such stories as if she was flawed.”
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Very good, well put, and true issue.
Thank you Keith! It annoys me how women feel they have to do these things to be happy xxx ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I found it so sad that someone should be made to feel worthless as the poor girl in your poem obviously was, Lucy.
We are ALL flawed creatures and not a one of us is perfect.
Low self-esteem coupled with a complete lack of confidence makes for a very sad existence.
My Grandma Cook always used to say that people should sweep the dirt off their own back porch before they go around pointing out how dirty everyone else's is.
Nice work!
~Dean ♥♥♥
Thank you Dean, it is sad but unfortunately due to social media, advertising and stereotypes, this is what happens. Thank you for reading xxxx ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Really well written x
Hey James, thank you very much xxx
No problems. I appreciate powerful poetry x
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Hello Lucy...
Many people don't like something about themselves and they don't take the time to see what they do like about themselves to enhance that...
Some people don't like their nose but, they like their smile...
All they really focus on is their nose...
Everyone comes from an egg and a sperm...
To turn out with a head should be amazing enough...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you Birdie! Everything you say is true....a sad tale. xxxxx
awesome poem and i mean beautiful in all great peace!!?? thank you
Hey Joey! Welcome to Cosmo!! Thank you for your kind words xxxx
Hey LUCY!!...I can see that you've struck a chord here........ and I don't think it's anything coincidental! (smiles)....... succinctly powerful write...... especially when considering the subject matter itself!!...... you NEVER disappoint dear poet sister!!...... talent like yours .....NEVER does!!.......tons-O-stars!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Hi Tony!! It's the world we live in now I'm afraid. Too many social pressures, terrible messages we are giving to the new generations. Thank you for being so supportive. I always appreciate your comments. xxxxxx
??? what a brilliant subject Lucy! Reminded me of a poem I wrote called "I survived" check it out if you want, it's pretty strong and straight to the point of the subject you speak of here,
what a brilliant write Lucy, this puts images in the readers mind, which that is exactly what you want, reading line by line...?????