Poem -
missing you
no goodnight kisse's
no sweet loving goodbye's
no word's of i love you
just tear's i shall cry
no holding me closely
no look's in my eye's
no hand on my face
just empty inside
no lying beside me
no arm's wrapped around
no whisper's of loving
just night's with no sound
i lost you through selfish
action's from the past
can't cry on your shoulder
it's over at last
i have to rise
i have to go on
i have to see clearly
that i did you wrong
and maybe someday
your heart again will be mine
with honest word's and action's
our true love we will find
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Comments
ah so sad but beautiful congrats Tina x
thanx susan it is sad all the best tina x
thank you williamsJl all the best tina x
chris i really really appreciate your input its so good to hear all you have said and i grew up writing this way but decided to try out different ways of writing so much to contend with these days thank you from my heart best wishes
tina x
Dear Tina,
How can a poem so sad be beautiful at the same time? You continue to amaze with your talent.
James W.
thank you james its sad but the end hopefully creates a better outcome with understanding and forgiveness to bring it together thanx from the heart for you input
tina x
Sister Tina,
All i have to say is (thanks Chris), for you have conveyed my thoughts on Ms.Tina and her abilities in the comment, you so eloquently delivered and Tina, (just as James has spoken), cease to amaze us all,The sky contains no limit for Tina, she has created and continue to build upon her own very nicely...You rock lady.
Cheers,
Jimmy.
jimmy i always appreciate your comments and i am thrilled at yours james and chris beautiful ones you are always a good friend jimmy thank you from all my heart
tina x
very beautiful poem a bit sad to add it to favorites! congrats!
thank you asmaa i tried to make it a little enlightening near the end but thank you all the best tina
thank you alfred a bit of hope near the end is what i aim for thank you
all the best tina x