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Mist

Mist

The air itself has stolen my valley.Β 
It has cloaked my woods.Β 
Enfolding, wrapping the skeletal trees in grey.Β 
There is no wind.Β 
No breeze.Β 
The soft air reminds meΒ 
that feeling free does not require a vista.Β 

It is just the state of being me.Β 

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Nigel Cresswell...

Thank you Pratibha,Β 
Misty days have there own magic.Β 
NigelΒ 

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Tracey Goundrill

I love this Nigel. Brilliant imagery. I’ve just sent you a private message. Let me know what you think.Β 

Tracey x

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Nigel Cresswell...

Hi Tracey I have just sent the email address but I'm crap at technology so I can only hope.Β 

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Being Me

Nigel, this is a beautiful, beautiful poem. It really is. How you have managed to write something so beautiful about fog is just brilliant. Pinned πŸ“ŒπŸ“Œ x

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The fish of the sea

Clever poem Nigel. Love your enveloping write. Kudos to you! Peace and smiles too! Kind regards. TFOTSΒ 

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Tony Taylor

Ah!!...how the state of being you....brings up such powerful imagery and wonderful insight!!.....ALWAYS a pleasure Sir NIGEL!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xoΒ  : )

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Nigel Cresswell...

Thank you so much Tony, so good to hear from you my friend. I love misty days.Β 
NigelΒ 
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Yiyan Han

Is it a state of mind in mist, or a state of mist in mind? Very intriguing piece.

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Nigel Cresswell...

Interesting question as well. I'll ponder that Yiyan. Thanks.Β 
NigelΒ 

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