Poem - 24 January 2014, 16:24

Morning Dew

The daylight hatched a small little hut,
on the sandy shores of my river's bank;
The twilight came to be matched on face;
while in my sleeps, someone came as dream;
The dark night stretched a black curtain
in between the burning sun and the wet moon;
a red rose petal, delivered a morning dew!

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Beasley...24 January 2014, 16:27

Williamsji! This is such a lovely description of a morning moment…"between the burning sun and the wet moon"! Well done!

val

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI25 January 2014, 19:04

Dear Poetess Valerie Eleby,

I wake up @ 400 hours,

I make up @ 600 hours,

My read starts @ 0800 hours,

My bread @ 0900 hours,

The day breaks @ 1000 hours !

There is a lot to write on a day, My day never ends, My night never darkens, I am a dedicated one, I am an inspired one, Thanks for your appreciation and good comments

Regards & love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI25 January 2014, 19:07

Valerie Eleby,

My morning's never end

My mourning's ever descend

Thanks for your appreciation and comments

WILLIAMSJI

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI24 January 2014, 16:40

Valerie Eleby,

I really appreciate your honest and straight forward open comment on my few verse. Thanks a lot. Regards from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Nancy Mcgowin25 January 2014, 12:17

Williams- This morning dew, sounds wonderful, send some this way! This is very, very, lovely!!!!

Nancy

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI25 January 2014, 19:13

Nancy McGowin,

Thanks for your appreciation of my " Morning dew ". Encouragement, experiment, enthusiasm , all these three elements makes a Poet to perfectness. Thanks for your lovely words, Regards WILLIAMSJI

Michael25 January 2014, 17:02

I like this one. Short one but sweet in it's moments of the morning fog and the dew upon the wetness of the banks. Good job

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI25 January 2014, 19:16

Michael Ammari,

Life is short too; but sweet,

Like my short verse; a dew drop;

It fades like a morning mist, Thanks for your valuable comments Sir

Regards & Love from WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI25 January 2014, 19:16

Nancy McGowin,

Thanks for your appreciation of my " Morning dew ". Encouragement, experiment, enthusiasm , all these three elements makes a Poet to perfectness. Thanks for your lovely words, Regards WILLIAMSJI