Mortal Mortality.
Witness My Own Mortality.
One day I died,
But didn't leave.
Lupus had taken my air & had stolen my heartbeats,
Right from under me.
The potential of this mortal,
To witness my own mortality.
The flashing ceiling lights,Β
Multiple hands on my chest,
Removing obstructions,
To feed tubes into my flesh.
Whether there was anathesia,
I wasn't aware,
My mind had wandered to the life,
I had & yet to comprehend.
Waking up from a coma,
Nine day's I travelled the spiritual realm,
There was no pain just hope,
Which delivered my soul back into My body in the physical world.
To breathe life into a new existence,
Replacing my old values & new Appreciation for time.
The importance to give & live as Much of it,
Because there is no immortality,
On this planet earth of mine.
The interesting thought,
Is when people look into my eye's.
They have no idea,
I witnessed my mortality,
On the day I died,
ββBut thankfully I was brought back to life.....
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Comments
cool write! in my faith the gift of immortality is free and all will receive it in the near future!, and then this world will have it!, thank you for sharing that experience!..........................................Jim
Hi Jim "The Lad"
Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated. May you have a beautiful, fulfilling, creative, positive & motivated day/week ahead π ππΏ π π―Β
Kind regardsΒ
Georgia βπΎ π
I will if you call me plain old Jim, great write!
Hi Jim,
Will do ππΏ
I really enjoyed this one Georgia. Such an experience! You have encountered something that only very few of us will do during our lives. Intriguing poem.Β
Hi The fish of the sea,
Thank you & I appreciate your words. It's one of those experiences you wouldn't wish on someone else but feel gratitude all the same to have experienced it because I'm alive to share it. May you have a beautiful, positive, creative, fulfilling & motivated day/week ahead π ππΏ π π―.Β
Aww same to you! But please, feel free to call me Max~
Hi Max,
Will do ππΏπ
Oh Georgia! How can I not pin this? This is so heartfelt and raw and real and scarily amazing. Thank all the gods in all the heavens that the doctors managed to save you. Hope you're okay now. Hugs x
Hi Being Me
Thank you ππΎ for your kind words. I am good & thankful which I am everyday. It's a blessing to have another chance to live & create beautiful memories.
Hope your well & have a positive, creative & beautiful day πππΏπ«π―
May blessings fall abundantly upon you dear friend π x