Mother told me of the Phantom

On a dimly lit road she walked alone
one night (excitedly, she now told)
crickets hissing in the bushes
stars shining bright (country road, no street lights)
an owl watched her curiously;
perched on the branch of a high tree
then she stopped, instinctively
a hallow silence, only breath sounds
no crickets or nocturnal fray;
she’d never seen the night behave that way
what she saw next, was incomprehensible
what looked like a giant, stood not far ahead of her
nearly the entire road he did straddle
leaving an open path in the middle
her sleeping house, was no more than a hundred feet away
it would take hours to turn around
and circle back the other way
the phantom stood his ground
right before the road began to descend down
(she laughs nervously, as if reliving)
then she prayed for deliverance
begging for the removal of the evil presence
her eyes opened, and there remained the obstacle
with faith renewed and new courage gained
she walked unharmed, never looking back;
'though she was scared as hell'
(this is her favorite story to tell)
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Happy Halloween Chris! spooky write
hey, Lisa, thanks for your kind comment, have a nice day
Hi Chris, another great one here, wondering though is the giant a metaphor for something else?
cheers jeff
hey Jeff, thanks for comment, and strangely enough I was wondering the same thing, this story actually happened; according to my mom, but in my mind I thought of it as a metaphor; facing your troubles head on, not backing off, something like that, good comment, my friend....cheers
My Brother Poet Chris,
Your dear Mother so long ago, confronted by the Phantom. A young lady whose valor superseded all her inhibitions as she trod straight through the very core of the Phantom, as even he kowtowed to her bravery.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
peace and love to you as well, Larry....beautiful comment, my friend and you are so right to say that, my mom is facing some health issues right now, but she has always been a tough brave soul, cheers pal
Hi Chris, lovely spooky write, chilly. Thanks for sharing. Warm regards. Cheers.
Hey Chris.....this is kinda creepy...enjoyed it altogether.... You are a very talented writer
Cheers....Rose
A good Halloween scare here. Liked how the girl braved the way home passing the giant inspite of her fears and it's a great message. Nice write! -Mimi. xx
thanks for comment, Mimi, the 'girl' was my mom, the poem is an old Correia story she has told a thousand times, she has lots, lol....I'll write another one about a demon in a bed, I'll see how it turns out and decide whether or not to post it, be well....cheers