Poem -

Mouth My Name Slow

Mouth My Name Slow

If you think of me quick
and you
mouth my name slow
Then you
might just miss some
of the
many imperfections
you previously
assigned to me
in one of those moments
of pique when
your anger did peak so ..

 

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Gwendoline

Wow Neville once again you pen a strong punchy short. This is a pukka poem my friend👌 Reads like a swift wrist slap 👋 Brilliant and most enjoyed :)
Gwen x 

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Tony Taylor

Hmmmm!!?....still mouthing your name slow!!.......and the anger doth quite easily arrive!!.....I am ever-piqued....in interest.....and in the advertisement so subtly applied!!......smiles.......ever the pleasure dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  :  )

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Neville

You got me smiling inanely here too sir but there are those close by who dont know me from Adam who appear to be wondering whether I have just suddenly developed Bells Palsy .. Cheers seems hardly enough my friend, so I shall send another volley of rockets your way as soon as I can locate my flint and tinder ............... :) N 

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Being Me

Well this is cleverly written! I love that it is a really clever " telling it like it is"  Well written x

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Neville

Thank you so much Being Me .. that'll do more than nicely :) x

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Shaun Cronick

Neville an astute write and to be honest after reading twice it seems to me like something the Great Bard would deftly write to put one in one's place.
Echo's of Shakespeare and darned good to see.
Nicely done, full honours and pinned for another deserved reread.

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Neville

Forsooth & by saint John .. then I do bless thee & verily sir ............................................ N :)

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