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MURDER ON HIS MIND

Last Saturday night
He went to the movies
with murder on his mind
He said I rather see them
Die then see dumbo fly 
And he won't cry when they
Die there ain't picnic in his
Mind that I find

He laughed at me when
I told him I went to see
Dumbo fly and not see
Them die and I would
cry when they die
He had murder on his mind

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Anwer Ghani

I LIKED ITS NARRATION AND THE DEEP MEANING.

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Anwer there guy sit and have coffee with who think it funny I went to see Dumbo then see  John wick  So he  rather go see John Wick then Dumbo  

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Marion

I'm with you Greg...Dumbo any time...lol. nice work ?? 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Marion I like Dumbo it was a good movie I have a friend I sit with with coffee making fun of me because I want to see Dumbo and not John wick

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Marion

Lol..who needs friends when you've got Dumbo anyway ?

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Tony Taylor

Smiles!!..... I'm with everyone here GREG!!.....DUMBO is a classic..... but I must admit... that as "Action Films" go..... "John Wick" is just 'over the top' enough to be entertaining..... still... doesn't compare to the "magic" of DUMBO!!...... fun and insightful read/write my friend!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?❤

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