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MURDER ON HIS MIND

Last Saturday night
He went to the movies
with murder on his mind
He said I rather see them
Die then see dumbo fly 
And he won't cry when they
Die there ain't picnic in his
Mind that I find

He laughed at me when
I told him I went to see
Dumbo fly and not see
Them die and I would
cry when they die
He had murder on his mind

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Anwer Ghani

I LIKED ITS NARRATION AND THE DEEP MEANING.

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Anwer there guy sit and have coffee with who think it funny I went to see Dumbo then see  John wick  So he  rather go see John Wick then Dumbo  

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Marion Price

I'm with you Greg...Dumbo any time...lol. nice work 😊🌷 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Marion I like Dumbo it was a good movie I have a friend I sit with with coffee making fun of me because I want to see Dumbo and not John wick

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Marion Price

Lol..who needs friends when you've got Dumbo anyway 🤣

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Tony Taylor

Smiles!!..... I'm with everyone here GREG!!.....DUMBO is a classic..... but I must admit... that as "Action Films" go..... "John Wick" is just 'over the top' enough to be entertaining..... still... doesn't compare to the "magic" of DUMBO!!...... fun and insightful read/write my friend!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo 🐧❤

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Greg....I would go see "Dumbo" too...I am not into violent movies and Tony picks on me for it...My favorite movie is "Bambi" and I hope they redo it with the new computer technology too.  We all have our own type of movie we prefer to see.  I bet everyone on here would expect that I love romance moveis....which I do!  Lol  I also like adventure and comedies.  But I refuse to go see movies with graphic violence or gangster type mob movies which I loathe, and Tony likes.  To each his own.  I would like to see "Dumbo" with my kids. xo ;) 

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Greg Etsell

thank you Cherie I don't go to  movies that much
I have been to 3 movies this year that lot for me I don't go to the movies that much  and yes I went to see Dumbo
it was good movie there was lot kids there to
I watch TCM  on tv my fav I love the old movies are
better 20s-70s  there the best to me and soon
I may join TCM movie club thanks for reading

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Greg Etsell

Cherie if like romance movies have you seen
the 1939 movie weathering heights it has to
be the greatest romance movie of all time 

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Yes, Greg....I have seen it....but many years ago.  I would LOVE t watch it again.  Thanks for the reminder.  I may try to find that movie to buy to have in my collection.  Thanks.

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Greg Etsell

I saw ones but the time I couldn’t get to it maybe now that I am old I may like it

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