Poem - 06 September 2017, 13:28 Must Sambit Kumar Pradhan Hallowed halo of a warm burnished gold, Hypnotic rhythm of that breathing blue, The wick must die for the flame to live. Like 2 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 686 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Alive Color Flame Light Sacrifice Poetry Genre: Freestyle Narrative Tragedy Topic: Reality Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
sparrowsong06 September 2017, 13:32 Hello Sambit... Short and AMAZING! The wick must die for the flame to live... WOW! Great write! Thank you for sharing... Hugs... sparrowsong Reply
Sambit Kumar Pradhan06 September 2017, 13:35 Shukriya so very much Sparrow, for such a generous review of my humble words. It is very sincerely appreciated. :) Reply
Jason Brown07 September 2017, 15:49 The wick must die for the flame to live. True...but in a symbiotic relationship; when one partner dies...the other must surely follow...it's the nature of consumption. As always...you see and say what's there...and in so doing, illuminate a tiny corner of a darkened world. J ;) Reply
Sambit Kumar Pradhan07 September 2017, 15:56 Shukriya so much for your generosity as always Jason; much appreciated! :) Reply
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Hello Sambit...
Short and AMAZING!
The wick must die for the flame to live...
WOW!
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Shukriya so very much Sparrow, for such a generous review of my humble words. It is very sincerely appreciated.
:)
True...but in a symbiotic relationship; when one partner dies...the other must surely follow...it's the nature of consumption.
As always...you see and say what's there...and in so doing, illuminate a tiny corner of a darkened world.
J ;)
Shukriya so much for your generosity as always Jason; much appreciated!
:)