Poem -
My Angel part 4
From, my book of Angels
a ray of light so strong
It felt as though
I'd been struck fiercely
by a bolt of sun
I can but gaze
upon this powerful
yet gentle fiery flame
I stand bewildered
touched by a vision so soft
my cheeks caressed by the gentle breeze
although my eyes weakened
a presence of wings in sight
I am aware of such beauty
and gracious light
created just for a moment
a miracle has fallen to earth
never will I understand
yet I do believe
in this wondrous being
this magnificent brightness disappears
and in ecstasy I stand and I gaze...
I've been touched by an angel today.
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I think the two lines that encapsulate the beauty of your words are "never will I understand yet I do believe."
We do not have to understand. It does not determine belief. You create the aura early on through your choice of words. "Gentle fiery flame" is a great phrase and alliterative.
And, as ever, the perfect last line dear friend. 🌹
Another absolutely beautiful review dear Bernie, yes, this was my first ever poem about Angels and I wrote 12 years ago, I truly love what you have pointed out, i have a few poems of my Angel now I am always so happy to see you on my poetry. Thank you my dearest Bernie. 🌹
And I am always more than happy to see your poetry dearest Shirley. Thank you. 🌹🌹
Uplifting and beautiful and sorely needed today Shirley. Something exists I think though like you...I ponder, ponder and ponder. Hugs x
Dear Marion we live amongst them for sure, although we may only know when we really need them. Thank you dearest Marion. 🌹 Hugs galore.