My dark Passenger

loving that 'dark passenger' Amber, this write pops, and to be honest you haven't said anything that is obviously offensive, the reader is a bible believer himself, and to have someone on a poetry site say 

'I've searched for God, happiness is all I seek

'As for me, I fight my battles alone, perhaps I am weak'

is neither here nor there, it is a really good line by the way....a religious destination should be based on a personal journey, in my opinion...  what I find fascinating about the 'dark passenger' concept here is how well you articulated it in this poem, so mysterious cool and a bit edgy, you come across... would enjoy having you stretch out the persona a little more, perhaps 'dark passenger 2'... it really is a great theme to explore, I promise not to steal the idea, but I do like it a lot, just saying.... great subject matter, superb write, reads like a million bucks....cheers pal

Hi Amber Great write I think many could relate 
when you say about feeling sadness that turns to rage.
so we put a facade up and suppress how we really feel 
to the outside world 
but hiding inside is the "Dark passenger" of unhappiness.
A great read  best wishes Debs 

Great piece of poem full of emotions, poignant but beautifully written

It was a pleasure reading your poem

James

Awesome write amber!

emotional !!!! well done

What you have written here I relate to whole heartedly 100%. Your title was perfect for this, and here...on this site...is where you belong with feelings like this, your not alone. I have written many on this subject but you conveyed much more beautifully, with subconscious talk and outward honesty. Amber keep it up, you have progressed so much since your first posts on cosmo and I admire your writes. Peace.

yeah!!!  standing o, congrats Amber, well deserved, this poem is so good, I'm almost surprised it won, lol (kidding Cosmo) outstanding, your originality, articulation relatability all spot on  

Congrats. Well deserved for this honor.

Amber great poem

Hello Amber...

Congratulations on your fabulous write! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

Heartfully penned words.

Your Poem touched me deeply.. Your Dark Passenger is the ego split mind 

which occludes our vision of the absolute or the creator or God,which ever..

  it is very difficult to over come but through powerful exploratory poems like this you will find the 

path..It takes a lifetime..It has a great rhytm as well

congratulations!!!

I hear you, Amber and commend your acknowledgment of needing to take your darkness. Nothing exists outside of its nature. The fact that all people are capable of great evil is a testament to the wickedness dormant inside us. 

You are more than welcome to message me. I am no stranger to darkness. There is nothing you could share with me that would divide my love for you.

Be well, friend.

Hi Amber Congratulations!! A well deserved 
winner for a great poem 
Best Wishes Debs