Poem -
My Dream Shattered
Dog’s barks too loud
How unsettling
With a pillow covering my ear
Neighbors yelling at night
My dreams shattered
Head started spinning
Waste peace of night
Moonlight starts to shine
My face dries
Gwen P.
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well written linda good imagery in your poetry short and relavant nice haiku very
original bravo!
Thank you so much Linda!
Hey GWEN!!.....VERY compelling poetry my friend!!.....VIVID imagery here driving the poem forward into the minds eye of the reader...... one question ~ why is it ~ "My face dries" at the end?...... is the author crying?.... just curious!?.......ALL STARS!!.... well done......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳♥?♥?
Hi Tony! Thank you very much! Your poems are fantastic!... That last line My Face Dries, well to be really frank! the author did cry because the sound of the dog ruined her dream! :') Thank you very much for the comment!
Kalofae! This poem is TOO TRUE bruh! hahaha - It's funny, those nights when you wake up and you're crying...then you start crying because you're crying...because you know why you're really crying!
Or is it just me? XD
~ H.A.D
Hahaha you really understand meLMFAO!! thanks for the comment :D