Poem -
My dreams
They say that simple things are free
My dreams
My dreams are not simple,
I have to Reach for my dreams Like grabbing the Stars.
Which sounds impossible,I knowĀ
But that's why it's my dream
I don't want Fame I don't want wealth
All i want is That special Name to be in my life,
To be happy,To be Content, To smile each day,I don't want alot, I just want my simple ways, Those days are when im happy,Which why it is so simple, but why would I know?Ā that its just to simpleĀ
they say that simple things in life are you free so why is this not available to me ? All iĀ wish and dream of is to be HAPPY.
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Oh Sally...I could not scroll past your heartfelt words without commenting. You have articulated yourself so well in this. I have found dreams to be forever just out of my reach. And if, by chance, I do manage to grab one ...it gets away. Damn slippery are dreams!Ā I am the sort who wishes on stars and on pennies thrown into water...and so your poem really resonated with me. I hope your dreams come true, Sally...I really do. As for happiness...well, happiness is found within the confines of a moment. Happiness is tiny, small. It is never one big whole thing...moments...look for the happiness contained in a moment. All the best to you and yours x
Hi there thank you so so much for your comment that has really touched my heart I'm struggling a lot in life at the moment after reading your comment is the first time I've actually smiled in a long time so thank you xxx
Bless you, Sally.Ā I hope things start to get better for you. This is always a difficult time of year for many and this year it is made even more so. Look for those tiny bits of happiness! They are always there, some where within a moment, but difficult to spot. All the best to you xx
Very nice. Itās what we all wish for. OrangeĀ
Honest write Sally, keep reaching for those dreams my friend š¹
Welcome! nice write!..............Jim
Well composed piece
The happiness is
we appreciate what weāve got that only matters
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Happiness... such a desire from all. Yet its do hard to reach isn't it. Your poem is so very beautiful here Sally. Truly, clever and well structured. Welcome to the Cosmos! I'm sure you'll fit right in. Kind regards. Kudos, peace and smiles. TFOTSĀ
Hi there I just hope that everybody was see this reply I just want to say thank you to everybody else who has commented on my poem I suffer really bad from mental health I have since the age of like 18 19 I am 44 but the strange thing about it is a little secret my daughter she actually is only 10 and she made suggestions towards the poem am I allowed to enter another competition as it really helps with my depression having something to keep my mind occupied and thank you very much for the warm welcome it's not very often that I have nice things said about me me in my life if I'm quite a very lonely person and don't have no friends so thank you very much thank you
I'm so glad that I join this site and I want to say thank you to each and everyone of you that have gave me such positive supportive comments it really means a lot to me thank you xxxx
Happy holidays and new year my friend. Dont stop writing. Peace and smiles to you. The Fish of the SeaĀ