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My Familiar friend

My Familiar friend

Each passing day sees a small but perceivable change….An extra wrinkle here and there,
But I would tell you it’s a laughter line- a clear  sign of  levity.
For so many years I never really looked at that face that launched a thousand zits,
I loved it from a distance
But wished I had known it sooner.
But as time went by I saw the beauty in your  slightly crooked smile,
The perfect, even teeth and the  slowly developing double chin…
That persistent   single hair that always needs a tweeze before you  exit into the outside world
These small details all make yours a  face that I could recognise with my eyes closed
By touch alone
A face like no other, one that smiles at me, cries with me, frowns and glares at me
Whose bleary eyes tell a tale of too many dirty martini’s  and late nights
I love that face, If I don’t love it who would ?
Ah I see you looking at me…don’t you just love mirrors?
 
    
 
 

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Jason Brown

The gentle mocking and close attention to detail are a particularly clever touch; leading the reader up your primrose path right to the very end: then comes the delicious reversal/reveal...which is a remarkably rewarding payoff.

I think we can all recognise ourselves in this mirror...as it changes that little bit every day ... Bugger!!

Very nicely done...

J ;)

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lodigiana

Hi Jason..so pleased you enjoyed it...I love writing something with a slanted comedy touch-  it's a real departure from the sometime much more serious, sadder side of life .. mind you I wasn't sure about sharing some aspects of my mirror image- that bloody single chin hair is the bane  of my life..but I guess I'm amongst friends :) Thank you for your lovely comments! xxx
Lodigiana 

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StevieC

haha! you got me!!! I didn't see that one coming- great piece of poetic  comedy writing. Loved the 'Face that launched a thousand zits'!  always good to read something that puts a smile on my face - thank you for that xx

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