My Love Is Like The Rain

I watched her stand there , I was speechless
I knew that she knew what I was doing
How do I get myself out of this?
How do I lay my heart out and paint it white
How does a fool like me make anything right?
I avoid the beautiful sunlight and story-filled day
I do not deserve anything good
Let the blackness stay
Cover my eyes and hear my heart
Let the lightning tear apart...
what was the prince I was
My love is like the rain
You will see its passion
I will come to you and regain
The love we had...

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Comments
Great use of imagery here when wanting to express the depth of your love for this person, being above all things. I also love again your use of the elements throughout this piece. Something I liked about another of your poems. Your connection with nature is beautiful
Gwen :)
Thank you, Gwen. I always try to add nature to my poems. I take walks and just feel so privileged to be surrounded by beautiful trees and hearing the songs of birds.
Lovely poem. A passionate and creative write ☀
Thank you, Shelly. ♥️