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Goodbye mother
Goodbye father
Goodbye brother
Goodbye lover
Goodbye spring
And summers rain
Goodbye children
I'll never raise
Goodbye hopes
And dreams of afar
Goodbye home
And winters howl
I'll miss the fall,
With her colors bright
And the windy slopes
Of idaho at night
Dreams of collage and marriage too
Of a partner and children
A new branch in our tree
Goodbye boy whose hands I've held
Goodbye sister, who couldn't be here
Goodbye summer winter fall and rain,
I'll miss you all, till we meet again.
I've loved and lived, in my seventeen years
Now I'll walk away, from this life I've lived
It won't be disease
Nor accident will it be
That takes the life, of the girl who was me
Its sadness, and heartbreak
Not the romancing kind
But the broken soul kind.
Goodbye baby,
whose name I'll never know
Goodbye future,
I swear I wanted you so.
Goodbye life, I should have lived.
My solution is wrong, I already know this.
As my light is fading, I feel his arms.
I want his forgiveness,
For the hurt I am about to cause

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Dean Kuch

Yes, just think, Savannah. All of the wonderful life experiences you have listed here (with the exception of marriage--ahem--I've done it twice and I ain't EVER goin' down that road again) would never be realized if the young girl in your poem went through with taking her own life.
Nothing nor anyone is worth killing yourself over.
To quote Metallica, "Sad, but true."
~Dean Kuch

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Vannah Robertson

I agreewith you, with the exception of the marriage part;) I've seen some great ones as well as some that make me  cringe:D 
thank you for your comment tho 

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John DeFoore Jr

The saddest Part of all, is no chance to find out if its just a passing cloud.
So much changes so quickly. So much joy love and peace missed because one jumps from the boat just before it reaches the pier.
fear not a passing cloud thinking it is forever.
a well written sad poem
Your friend
John
 

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John DeFoore Jr

After seeing you sad, would you reassure me you are safe and writing poetry only.
it is so sad and well written just wanted to check.
john

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